My first poem

For those who wish to share how your faith has helped you deal with the suicide of another perons -- if you can do so in a non-preachy way.
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My first poem

Post by evangelia » Sat Feb 13, 2016 4:35 pm

I imagine you being a sea eagle, crossing the Aegean see,
wind in your wings and majestic views, you free!

I imagine you being an almond tree, birds playing on your brunches.
Every spring you blossom in full glory,you are a wonder!

I imagine you being a lively stream,running playfully down, till the see,
critters quench their thirst in your banks, Carefree!

i see you in the sky,between fluffy clouds,in every rainbow in every bright star,peaceful!

I see you in every beautiful part of this world,
you where part of this world
you where beautiful


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Re: My first poem

Post by Blossom » Tue Feb 16, 2016 9:33 pm

The 'reach' in your words feels like both yearning and release.

Take care.
Blossom x

If nothing else, give refuge to those in need.

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